Winter Warfare

A winter warfare unfolds tonight...

A whirling storm,

dancing frantically.

Winter gusts,

crashing left and right, blowing in random directions,

stealing your every breath and word.

Tree's swaying,

and banging their branches together.

Screams and howls,

shriek through it all.

Snow, everywhere,

blowing in the wind, blinding you.

Wolves racing each other.

And the midnight moon,

watching it all happen from above.

Another howl,

escaping the top of a snow capped mountain.

A CRY FOR PEACE!

A cry begging on  hands and knees to end this winter warfare.

Author's Note

Um, well, be honest and tell me what you think of it, and please ignore grammer and spelling mistakes, and if you cant help but notice them, just go ahead and tell me, I don't mind. Thank you! :)

Reviews

[Sarah]

This is beautiful. I love the short lines, and the way each line blends into the other, making it seem as though you're racing through this winter you describe while reading it (if that made any sense - it's magical, really) I loved: "Snow, everywhere, / blowing in the wind, blinding you. / Wolves racing each other. / And the midnight moon, / watching it all happen from above." Mhm, great lines. I envy you. (: & Grammar/spelling can take away from the poem (it didn't for me, atleast the first time I read it) but I would edit it ASAP, as it would be a shame for it to take away from the amazing poem you've written!