Lost, now found

The walls; fall.

People pouring out of the open area

like water.

Emotions take flight on the birds from heaven.

Families once lost, now found.

People running to their own.

Now an end to the war,

pressured to keep going by hate.

Now, everything that was once lost,

is now and forever found. 

Author's Note

IDK. Just read it and tell mewhat you think about it! Please and thank you!

Reviews

[Lalli]

good write!... that concept of freedom, the breaking free of oppression... flowing like water, fixing bonds once broken.

The first image that poopped into my head was the berlin wall.
I think you expressed it very well.. good job poet

much love n respect

-lalli

[Sarah]

Wonderful. =) Great symbolism and metaphor throughout this piece. I particularly enjoyed the imagery of people flowing like water. Interesting. Great job!

[ANNA]

I thought that was deeper then how I could explain anything. You have a diferent writing then a lot of people and that shows greatly. That you can talk about anything and bring it to life. Well Done..keep them coming!!

much lov n respect,
Anna