F.R.I.E.N.D.S.H.I.P.

All true friendships are like this one...

FRAGILE

RANDOM

INTENSE

ETERNITY

NOTEWORTHY

DAINTY

SIMPLE

HONESTY

INVARIABLE

PEACEFUL

 

"A friendship is a fragile thing,

in which random things will

happen.  Intence as it may seem

at times, it will last for an eternity.

It is very, very noteworthy.

It is as dainty as a new born,

and as simple as a heart to

love.  Honesty is the key to

sucseed in an invariable friendship.

If you can keep peace, you can keep

your friendship."

Author's Note

Tell me what you think and give me some advise on it.

Reviews

[Lalli]

the style! i love it!

as orginal as it gets! i'm inspired to possibly attempt a piece such as this. Well done, creative...very creative. you touch on the idea of friendship as thoroughly as a person could. great write, good job poet

much love n respect

-Lalli

[Nova]

Wow, I really liked this. You said everything that is in a friendship and its written quiet cutely. lol.
This is going to be one of my favorites.

[Blue Sky]

A very well penned piece,
You created a very wonderful piece
the acrostic form is very nicely written
that it's quite effective with
the elobarating of each acrostic word
in their bold fonts, it's has done its deed
very beautifully created of 'friendship'!

[Sarah]

Aw, this is really cute & definitely captures all aspects of friendship well. =) I particularly enjoyed the word "random", as that is exactly what friendship is. Sometimes, it can come out of nowhere and someone you never expected to even like is suddenly your best friend. Great job!