To...

A very different poem....

To walk down,

the roads of the lost and

forgotten.

To step another step into

my quicksand and sink more and more

into my depths of dispair and sorrow.

To drown in your own tears

and comment your own suicide

murder.

To look in the mirror

and frown like a sad clown.

To see yourself die and end

too many times to where

you just cover your eyes

and you run in the dark

forever.

 

"To walk; to step;

to drown; to die;

to see your image,

just you; a lie."

 

Reviews

[ANNA]

"To walk; to step;
to drown; to die;
to see your image,
just you; a lie."

Wow where did you come up with that! Amazing word.. So powerful it blows me away even when I'm holding to dear life.. It sad and I just hope your not unhappy! But I know when we write things that are like this. It more beauty then sad to me. We can only learn from what happens in are lifes..
Love it. keep writing girly=)

Much love n respect,
Anna

[Sarah]

Omg. o= This was AMAZING. It literally took my breath away. o= I loved this so so much. Each line you wrote, I found myself thinking "that's my FAVORITE" but then the dialogue at the end was SO brilliant, that... it's definitely my favorite. XD So fantastic. I really can't say anything constructive about this because I'm just so in awe. XD Great job!!!!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Very well penned. Thank you for sharing, Debileah