The Swing

I just thought of the layout of this one, one day, so I wrote out the begining, and the rest just came to me!

swiftly, swiftly,

I fly through the air,
in a world of wonder,
without a single care.

higher, higher,
so fun it could be crime!
with the wind in my face,
a new adventure every time.

harder, harder,
I push, push and push
for I must touch the sky
I'm flying soaring, WOOSH!

simple, simple,
and yet so fun between
the ground and sky and seat,
I'm flying on this swing.

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Nicely done, like the rest of your writing. I find this one well written and good use of punctuation makes it flow :)
Bravo