Sugar Rush!!!

I swear they gotta take me to ICU,
cause I...stop breathing when I see you,
in this crazy a*s world I'ma stand right by you,
and you my girl so you know I'ma do right by you!
I'm planting seeds, growing love like I'm growing my 'fro,
I'll be ya shoulder to lean on, you can call me young dro!
I'm like the dopeman...but love is my drug,
and you my only customer so I'll give you a dub,
I gotta show you how much I really care,
whatever you need, I got you babe! Like Sonny and Cher!
They say the storm don't last forever, I think I been through mine,
I see clear skies and the sweet sunshine.
Don't wanna cause you no pain, reach the goals I set,
the only time it'll rain is when I get you wet! (haha)
And you ain't gotta change for no-one, just...do what you do!
Cause you sexy as f**k!!! just...being you!
And when you thinking of something, I'm thinking it too,
so true...even when I'm not thinking, I'm thinking of you!
Right now, I'm thinking of some s**t I done said before,
but I'ma say it anways cause it applies forevermore,
"If I had it, I'd give you the sun, the moon, and the stars above,
but more importantly, I'd give you my mind, my body, and my love!
God must've had a smile when he planned your birth,
cause I wouldn't and couldn't trade you for ANYTHING on this earth!
And for that reason, I wish you knew your worth!
I wish you could see you how I see you and admire his work!
I wish the greatest explorer of the greatest generation
would search and search and NEVER find a beauty to replace you as first!
I wish your haters would lurk around a fountain of youth,
but lack of truth about you would prevent 'em from quenching their thirst!
I hope this poem is getting through to you,
I hope you know how much I really love you!
You are beautiful!...and you're sweet like cinnamon,
I'm on a sugar rush so will you be my adrenaline?

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

uh hugh.........yeah I'm hooked reeling back on your poetry I like this.
Your girls is a blessed one she's getting spoiled as it should be!!! I like
your emotion, you lay it down thick. I even liked how you repeated
yourself from 'You ARE Beautiful' I see that you say that all the time really
nice man.....keep'em coming, you flow nice.

[ITM]

man i loved this. it showed a lot of depth and i love the wording. keep it up!