I want to fall.

No parachute. Heart open like windsock. Arms wide like forest fire.
Lungs full like children in candy store. No fear. Brain illuminated like
ambulance. Mouth mimicking heart. Hands prominent as landing pads. No
pressure. Eyes telling story to brain. Brain mimicking lungs. Legs
strong like Stonehenge. No map. Spine like bed-frame. Voice like
lighthouse. Arms like seat-belt. No looking back. Eyes wide like a
twenty-four hour sunrise. Heart mimicking eyes. Hands like symphonies.
Lungs like churches. Arms like band-aids. No weight. No worry. No
weapons. I want to fall (for you) like that.

Reviews

[LadyNaida]

Wow! That is a deep love. I thought I was a romantic fool. You got it bad! Awesome write!

[DreyaArt]

as sweet as this that your writing it to somebody, it kinda didnt make sense to me, the formation was interesting. keep writing.

[nostal]

What an exquisite penning.

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

This is beautiful. Amazing. "Spine like bed-frame. Voice like lighthouse." I want to fall like that too...so pure, so complete, so...humble.

Perfect.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exquisite metaphors draw amazing imagery across the reader's mindscape~