Why Can't You

This is something that I wrote about someone that I have like for 6 years. He just does not see how much he means to me

Why cant you see that you are all that I need?

Why cant you see that I just want to hold you tight?

When will you see that you mean everything to me?

When will you see these tears that stream down my face?

You are the only one that is in my dream, why cant you see?

Why wont you try to look inside my heart and see that you are the reason that it still beats?

My love grows everyday for you.

Why cant you see that I am hurting?

Will you wipe the tears from my eyes?

Will you ask me what is wrong?

Will you understand when I tell you that you are the one I need?

You are perfect in my eyes.

What is it that you see?

I want you to know that I love you.

No one word can explain how I feel.

So, why cant you see that you are all that I need?

Reviews

[Debbie]

I am finally over him!

[Patrick Henry]

I think he sees it!! lol This is very bright text. It's enough to illuminate the meat locker I'm sitting in right now. Very emotional poem, but more of a "cry for help" kinda one, to me. If he were to recognize this poem for himself, he may see it as an emotional roller coaster about to happen if he were to indulge. I he DOESN'T see it and he DOES tell you, you get to at least edit the POEM and worry not the response to it. ; ) -Mark

[Debbie]

He does not see. I won't ever show him the poem. It is something I just wrote one night when I could not sleep

[Sarah Redigan]

Your poetry is so real ... u can feel the pain and sadness ... I too have been at this point in my life and it sucks .. but I does get better . I hate for people to hurt over love . Your poem. speeks truth it is not simple by any means ... we all hurt and writing brings hope .. a way to help us to release some of our sadness. Keep writing if its what u love if it helps if it just makes you feel a tiny string of faith a flicker of happiness then never stop ... you are a good person because u love and have the want to give love to others ... good luck ill have my fingers crossed for you

[Sarah Redigan]

♥

[Debbie]

Thanks!

[Sarah Redigan]

Your very welcome

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it is really sweet when we fall in love but it is more sweet if we feel we are loved. it really hurts if those we love dont feel the same to us. i hope lovers would always feel each other..

[Nithin Purple]

rhymed,,good

[Purplerose]

I know this feeling well. I think at times they feel the same way, they just don't know how to say or show it. :)

[Debbie]

I wish he would tell me that he likes me too if he does. I dont like wondering. I stay up some nights just thinking about it