Because of YOU

Because of YOU

A Poem by Debbie
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Something that I wrote, because someone that I cared about broke my heart, and he lied to me.

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Your lies broke me down

You have made me cry a million tears

You started out perfect and right

but you just blinded me with your talk

now to me you are just a cold, and dirty person

You played my heart like a Grand Piano

Beautiful and sweet

but then you went and broke all of its strings inside

You knew what to say to me to make us close

then you went and shattered me

You broke my heart

You broke my trust

but most of all you destroyed me

I'm hurting because of YOU!!!

© 2012 Debbie


Author's Note

Debbie
Please tell me what you think! sorry if my spelling is wrong. I'm not the best speller in the world. Please try not to say horrible things about this though.

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You shouldn't tell people why you wrote your poem if it defines ur poem .. people wont relate to it as much if u do that... still a very very strong poem I love the line about braking all the strings insinde ... great way to write that ... ♡

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on October 24, 2012
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Debbie
Debbie

Portland, OR



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