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submerged

submerged

A Poem by phonetixs
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submerged

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"..Death is a bridge, we're in the brook that goes under it-.."
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.Lets take a voyage...

Off the bananna boat, i plunge in with mask and a transparent raincoat
into waters where flames float. the banks flooding,breaking off the dam of slain hope
A maimed pope, not pious with lips stitched for crusades in famed quotes.
In stained notes I hear the moans and squeals of a b***h named Cerberus....
the nerves in bliss, gettin a hard-on from day-dreams of when Medusa served a kiss.
Waist high, standin in the wake of angels with clipped wings and demons with halos
a living set where the rest are strangled on crypt's strings, all screamin to stay low
dismayed so... while i see the silent sneer on the skeleton of Charon
he's starin'... into a living hell within us, making our skin and melanin a flarin'
But swim with me....so we can go and browse beneath the surface, to release the purpose
on why the gods of greece' thoughts or speech never came to bequeth the perfect..
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Beneath...
we sink, sifting through the lies and truth in motion
the notion; when karma's a guise and sleuth thats potent
emotions explodin implosions in the deeps of this ocean..
a formula of suicide and tall drugs...
with the high pot 'n noose for death, with a sweep as the quotient.
...we see..?
Moses hung on a hook swaying with the slabs of laws
there fat with flabs of flaws.....
with pirahanas eating his cheeks as torture,again..lies last at all?
seahorses pulling Elijah in a flaming chariot
its aiming carried hints of a valentine letter sealed by the kiss of Iscariot
to carry it to the raping priests for kids to be on their married list.
..Samson laughs aloud in the distance and pulls open a door..
spiraling towards the door...we float past the entry......

I see the many different shades of blue and turquoise
radiant notes of melody slipped me the cue to her voice
by choice, i ignore it. i continue to swim in this abyss..
in mist, i see the true evils floating down there amiss
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all is silent...and i clear the hedge...I witness.
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spirits in chains, gettin whipped by ropes and nine tails
their fear is enraged,gashin their hope as their spines fail
black and blue, the marks of a sadist's tactics
praying and crying, a sign of the gray-wished habits
the 12 disciples as slave drivers, using force as their worship
with forced witt they shepard the sheeps and goats for coarse bids
winged demons scream in fury...lacerating body parts
with the oven fueled by blasphemy, a flash in waving the sati marks
angels screaming profane, with their conscience eating their carcass
its hardship! with cherubims in the sky flaunt wits in the darkness
a sharp twist...the sound of snapping thralls
chains and cuffs hang the tough in the aura of trapping walls
held in bondage with a common faith, must we?
444,000 bowin to the enthroned centerfold
karma over faith? not what the zen be told....
we wait in awe...
in the center unveiled, sits Jesus of Nazareth
but what he bears is what every believer in has the risk
on his chest is strapped, a crucifix of dynamite
a common creed or prayer? twill be of uselessness in tries tonite
they lay in there and hide in fright....
what will happen next..?
He smiles, stands and offers the grace...
a prayer of few words....one of martyrdom!
A match sparks..and catches the whick
.closer
.closer
.closer
....boom..........You can only guess how the innocence died...

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Came to realization, drowning in its vice
going in and out in unison,as the mellow silence's spliced
euphoria reached as i slide on the shores
abided and abhorred as i feel the grout of crabs and parasites...
then a sigh of remorse...
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..then wry in contort... as i breathe for air again....
i breathe...i breathe.. 
the thickening air, eyes closed orgasmic in my soo sickening care
as the reverie folds....
we see the river styxx...
as an apparition..
and in reality i was in the heart shaped box of Death
where i fucked religion in reverse.....
....Think
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