Peace
A Poem by
Zephyr
A poem for a 10 words or less contest. Simple, clear.
Peace is simple-
It’s the harmony of life
And loss.
© 2008 Zephyr
Reviews
Great write! Good luck on the contest.
Posted 17 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
very pointed thought. Another nice job!
Posted 17 Years Ago
very pointed thought. Another nice job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow, clever. It's so short, yet had a twist at the end. I'd never thought of peace as being "loss" but... I supposed you're right... Thanks :) x
Posted 17 Years Ago
Wow, clever. It's so short, yet had a twist at the end. I'd never thought of peace as being "loss" but... I supposed you're right... Thanks :) x
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
A thinking piece..............and yes, peace comes in life or even death and loss........
Posted 17 Years Ago
A thinking piece..............and yes, peace comes in life or even death and loss........
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
hahaha! you cheated! 11 words is too much! haha! :)
just teasing, i like it. still think you're a poopyhead cheater...
Posted 17 Years Ago
hahaha! you cheated! 11 words is too much! haha! :)
just teasing, i like it. still think you're a poopyhead cheater...
2 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 5, 2008
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