Sometimes

sometimes things just get out of hand, sometimes it feels as if your drowning.

Sometimes

Without warning

        

Things will

     go wrong, it will be

     as if your lost, confused

     and lonely you’ll have

     nowhere to turn.

     you’ll be treading water

     as you try and climb out.

 

Things will

     seem like they’ll get better

     don’t be fooled as

     it’s just lies,

     drowning in blue

     it’s a tiring thing to do.

 

Things will

     get better

     of that I’m sure.

 

Things will

     keep going

     the world will keep spinning

     though there will be more blue

     and a lot of red too

     but as life goes on

     I must too.

Author's Note

make what you will of it, its a different to what im used of doing so i hope it ok. umm tell me what you think!!!

Reviews

[Zak]

This writing is interesting. Very neat: it is as if you are telling a story. You don't repeat the lines, but it gives an interesting touch throughout. Its so true in life, though. Thats the big thing. Good job! XD

Zak

[ebur™]

Great poem! I thought this was very unique, I've never seen a poem set up this way, also I like your message here that even if things go wrong, it'll get better, so keep moving. Wonderful piece :)