My little humming bird.

about loving someone so much you would give yor life for them, even if they didnt love you.

Given the choice my love, I would die for you,

Because my world is nothing without you,

You are my breath, my heart, my life,

And now as I close my eyes, you walk away,

I open my chest and I try to breathe,

My breath is fading fast, I’m dying,

I picture your face in my mind,

I love you,

With my last ounce of strength, I will try and sing to you,

My little humming bird.

Author's Note

the first line sounds william shakespeareish kinda, i think i've heard it before, so yer tell me what you think. ohh and its written from the guys prespective.

Reviews

[aleezae khan]

Really nice . If it's from a guy's perspective then I would really like to have a guy like that in future . Lol

[Jazmin-Ruby]

Jasmine, is this perspective from a guy named Fernando? Because if it is, I think he subconsciously communicated with your mind and heart to create this wonderful poem. He's the love of my life. And I enjoyed your poem from left to right! Your ideas are sweet stuff; keep going, please.

[Sam Ethan]

nice

[disheveledApathy]

Story of my life. Well with a particular guy anyways.

[JeniBearLuvsYou]

this is very well written i love it