DUST

DUST

A Poem by Phil Roberts

Dust amidst dust
A resting place of sorts
However many kites you flew
You never left the ground
You never heard a sound
Beyond the rage you screamed
Tearing down flags
In revolutionary rags
And changing nothing
Going nowhere
Sat in your armchair
Dust amidst dust

                                By Phil Roberts

© 2016 Phil Roberts


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Ashes to ashes and dust to dust. Great job. This is really good. "Tearing down flags
In revolutionary rags" - great lines.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phil Roberts

8 Years Ago

Thanks very much, Pete. I appreciate that :)
Thanks for reading it, Charlie. To be honest, it was as much a dig at myself as anyone else. I have just run out of the energy to carry on the fight, both personally and as an activist, which I can't claim to have been for some time now :) Just one of those glumly reflective moments.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Uh-huh - the armchair warrior comes to mind here. A curmudgeon, even. It's what can happen to some of those who never bother to grow any real roots within their community, their family, or themselves.
And then again, as Ecclesiastes says, it what happens - irrespective... "Stoicism" it is.

Encapsulating write, Phil.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Phil Roberts
Phil Roberts

macclesfield, north-west, United Kingdom



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I'm from the north-west of England where the rain lives. I am retired and a grandfather to many. I've led an "interesting" life, i suppose you could say, with lots of laughter and a few tears, like mo.. more..

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