Never ordinary Never easy Nothing parts the sea Nothing moves the earth This is a hard world And there is no give at all
Don't press your face to the ground It does not help Don't shout at the sky It does not hear Nothing helps And no-one hears This is desolation
In the wavering distance Less than light Reality drifts eerily by There is no need to go No reason to stay Grey coiling wraiths Rise and slowly sway They could be anything Anyone Distinctions have no place Nowhere to hide Here is where souls shudder And shatter
i see desolate wastelands as a human condition - fading vestiges of human resolve to create meaning in life - as if to think and dream makes no difference to one's existence - as if everything changes, everything's unstable and all the same at the same time - very bleak perception of humanity's grace, it had that effect on me - as if, if i wake tomorrow, i still am nothing and will be nothing wherever i go, whatever i am
steph
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
basically, this is devastatingly simple. I am subject to bi-polar depression. The problem isn't too .. read morebasically, this is devastatingly simple. I am subject to bi-polar depression. The problem isn't too severe these days but, this is how it feels to hit the lowest low.....or my interpretation of it. It's quite an old poem :)
8 Years Ago
oh, im so sorry to hear that, phil - i don't exactly know what you went through - but i empathize - .. read moreoh, im so sorry to hear that, phil - i don't exactly know what you went through - but i empathize - it was tough - reading your poem
i see desolate wastelands as a human condition - fading vestiges of human resolve to create meaning in life - as if to think and dream makes no difference to one's existence - as if everything changes, everything's unstable and all the same at the same time - very bleak perception of humanity's grace, it had that effect on me - as if, if i wake tomorrow, i still am nothing and will be nothing wherever i go, whatever i am
steph
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
basically, this is devastatingly simple. I am subject to bi-polar depression. The problem isn't too .. read morebasically, this is devastatingly simple. I am subject to bi-polar depression. The problem isn't too severe these days but, this is how it feels to hit the lowest low.....or my interpretation of it. It's quite an old poem :)
8 Years Ago
oh, im so sorry to hear that, phil - i don't exactly know what you went through - but i empathize - .. read moreoh, im so sorry to hear that, phil - i don't exactly know what you went through - but i empathize - it was tough - reading your poem
I'm from the north-west of England where the rain lives. I am retired and a grandfather to many. I've led an "interesting" life, i suppose you could say, with lots of laughter and a few tears, like mo.. more..