DISAPPEARANCE

There are times in my life
When all I want to do
Is to disappear
No plans
No questions
And no recriminations
Just disappearance
To nowhere

                            By Phil Roberts

Reviews

[Érenn]

It's a mood write for sure. Again can't express how much I love the brevity you exhibit in your write. This one's no exception. Love the vocabulary you have used here. Helps not only in maintaining the flow of the write but does invoke enough ambience for the readers to immerse in the mood of the narrator. And yes this is something every person experiences this felling at least once in their lifetime if not more ^^ Thank you for sharing. I like it much ^^

[mattavelli]

When my mother gives my wife a suggestion, I feel this way.

[Phil Roberts]

ah well, I can't say much about that, really. Good luck though :)

[Phil Roberts]

thank you very much :)

[Stan Lee]

I can relate to this feeling but one must examine the reason for disappearing. Is it so that others miss us or so that we will miss them?
Great poem Phil. A lot of meaning and emotion in a few words.

[Phil Roberts]

thank you very much. It's just one of those moods that passes :)

[Stan Lee]

That's true. I can relate to that. :)

[Jackie]

Somedays I feel the same way. Different experiences, yes but you my friend are not alone. Unfortunately yes we all do walk alone but without all the bad experiences we would miss out on a lot of good. Much of a interesting read. Keep it up:)

[Phil Roberts]

thanks, Jackie. Just one of those days, I guess :/