DREAM SPINNER

Oh, spinner of dreams
In the depth of imagination
Spin a dream for me
A tale of adventure and romance
Of myth and magic
And fragrant mystery
Spin lively for me
To take me elsewhere
To a place where gravity's pull
Is minimal
And reality 
Has no hold at all

    By Phil Roberts

Reviews

[James O'Rourke]

Nice write Phil. I enjoyed the cadence and use of rhyme. You've concocted a sweet little gem. The language is simplistic and gives it a sort of childish whimsy. Thanks for sharing this.

[Phil Roberts]

Thank you very much, James! You've picked up on just the qualities I was hoping to express :)

[James O'Rourke]

You're very welcome. I look forward to reading more of your work.