oh come on....

sorry the title was basically what i said when i started the poem. not hard to figure out what its about

My ideas are here.

The hand is not.

It holds the pen

But the writing is blocked.

 

Its happened before

But not like this.

Its on a new level,

A level of bullshit.

 

For god sake react.

Grow a pair, attack.

How hard can it be?

Write some words, be free.

 

The restrictions are too much.

The straight jackets tight.

But like hell I’m giving up.

For my passion I will fight.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

oompf and energy is present in your writing.....

[Pi Cee]

Relax, take a break. Breathing sometimes is all it takes to be free. Great poem. I really liked it.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! i'll keep that in mind next time!

[Michael G.]

That's why the Zen Garden music is on my profile. I find a freedom to write when it is playing in the background. Call it muse, call it an aid... whatever... it works for me and a few others, I've been told.
Good write!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Awesome using the block to you're advantage! Keep on keeping on!

[Mazie Tackett]

its nice

[Laura Maidah]

I loathe the title. I judged the book by its title. Lol. I thought it would suck How about: "Blockage" or "Cramped" Or "Stuck" or "Rut". They're all really lame, but they're ideas that can inspire something better for you. :)

[Laura Maidah]

It's. It needs an apostophe in the second stanza, first line. For god's sakes, react. It's less weird syntax-wise. That stanza however, is phenomenal. The last line is corny because of the inversion. It sounds archaic. Everything else? GEnius. You really delivered on this one.

[Falling Leaf.]

It takes talent to make words about having no words! Brava!
~The Wilted Rose