Octavarium

Octavarium

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
"

life comes full circle

"

I walk a path of gold

Stretching beyond the horizon.

Not aware of a pitfall.

I fade into the black with velocity.

Days it seems…years even.

Just descending into the noir.

But there seems to be light

At the end of this vertical tunnel.

 

Furiously I approach it.

Gaining speed with ambition.

I’ve exited the octavarium….

Landing firmly on my feet.

 

I walk a path of gold

Stretching beyond the horizon.

Not aware of a pitfall.

I fade into the black with velocity.

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Clever use of repetition! It felt like it came full circle with you starting and ending the piece in the same way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love how the first and last stanzas are the same, I think it creates a solid beginning and end. Well said!

Posted 12 Years Ago



2
next Next Page
last Last Page
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

417 Views
12 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 26, 2012
Last Updated on June 26, 2012

Author

nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



About
i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Drips of Wisdom #10 Drips of Wisdom #10

A Chapter by Pax


HIT YOUR GOAL HIT YOUR GOAL

A Poem by afra