Octavarium

life comes full circle

I walk a path of gold

Stretching beyond the horizon.

Not aware of a pitfall.

I fade into the black with velocity.

Days it seems…years even.

Just descending into the noir.

But there seems to be light

At the end of this vertical tunnel.

 

Furiously I approach it.

Gaining speed with ambition.

I’ve exited the octavarium….

Landing firmly on my feet.

 

I walk a path of gold

Stretching beyond the horizon.

Not aware of a pitfall.

I fade into the black with velocity.

Reviews

[Legolas]

Great job! Life is a circle and you portrayed it wonderfully!

[nigrum homonculus]

thank you legolas!

[Legolas]

Your welcome!

[Cole Hayley]

I agree with defying gravity, great vocab. I like the return to the beginning at the end as well! very nice work.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Love the usage of your vocabulary! Great piece.

[Alana McGuire]

This is really insightful! I love how you ended it as it so began. It fit very well that way. I also love your words choices, such as velocity, noir, and octavarium.
I really enjoyed this! Thank you for sharing it with me. :)

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

very nice work, it really keeps me thinking.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

You have a conjouring spirit and really do excel with your craft, young man!

[Dr. Wood ?]

nice work

[Harley (arbiter)]

Dude I love it! Reminds me of my "circle of emotions" it keeps. Going on and on and on and on. Lol journey moment there sorry. This was Awesome!

[Mazie Tackett]

you have once again amazed me with your writing skills

[Wild Willow Blue]

I love love love the repetition in this. Almost as if the person might be trapped and forced to repeat day after day. Trapped between worlds? Trapped in time? I love this, great job!