Not their business

don't you just hate it when your other half listens to their friends more than they do with you? i tried to capture that sentence in this poem. hope you like it.

I'm walking past all the bullshit and heading to where the problem really is. reasoning with hypocrisy accused of misogyny, I'm heading home. its what the heart entails when it damages itself, making me turn into someone else. more cynical, lyrical, deal with it yourself because I'm tired of the betrayal.

Now if you weren't impatient your patience would see the blatant vacant nature of your slurs, blurred by your peers ability to intercept your intellect. so don't judicate if you can't even regulate the immigration of your thoughts to your mouth without there being a friendly devil in the background.

Reviews

[XxxModifyTheMassesxxX]

fantastic. your word choice and the way you portrayed it all is absolutely amazing in this one, not to mention how well described it all is. bravo my friend

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its great! Full of big weird words and I like that! Nice job man