we are

we are

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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a motivational poem, i didn't exactly know where i was going with this as it was a burst of inspiration.

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We are the voice,

That screams at tyranny.

We are the choice,

That builds society,

Can we make it?

If we say we can.

Motivated

We will break the iron clad.

We are the eyes that create the vision,

We are the maths, expelling division

We are the alpha, the genesis, inception.

We are the wall, the ultimate protection.

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


Author's Note

nigrum homonculus
should i make it longer? i think i cut it a bit short

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Don't make it longer. I can imagine Obama saying something like this, haha! I was reading it, and by the time I got to the third 'We' I was like YES WE CAN! Wicked.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, but to the point. I like the rhyming and power in the words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You could make it longer, but it doesn't have to be. It's well spoken (written) and has a great flow as well. Amazing vocabulary used, and great message and meaning as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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