4 letters

funny enough, this was meant to be a very lovey dovey poem. but straight away i lost the insight to doing it. maybe another time phillip.

Them 4 letters

2 vowels  2 constantans.

But constant are the complications,

Constant are the complaints.

 

For f**k sake my heart aches.

I’m trying so hard to not pull the breaks.

But reaching an impasse? Inevitable.

The decisions I have made? Questionable.

 

But the dirt on the ground

Is not how I treated you.

I’m being brutally honest,

Walk the equator in my shoes.

 

If they don’t fit

Don’t ring, don’t complain.

Lead the life that I led,

A life of disdain.

 

So these 4 letters?

That have made me contemplate?

Its not love, far from it.

It got replaced with hate. 

Author's Note

first time writing off pure anger. is the emotion portrayed well enough?

Reviews

[Kevin S.]

I love how anger got the best of you in this poem. It's my favorite so far.

[Charlotte Haran]

You should write like this more! Good structure, you really expressed the emotion well.

[DWatts]

I love it. The way the poem builds on the assumption that the 4 letters are "love" is genius. Finishing the poem with the word hate is quite powerful, great way to close and show your feelings.

[Terry]

The passion of your anger is reflected in this poem.... Can view the anger portrayed in the quick, sharp snappy way you''ve written it...

[Chrishauna Thompson]

OMG.! I LOVE THIS POEM.!This poem makes you think and you never know until the end.! This shows passion and pain at the same time.! Good Job.!