another life lost

another life lost

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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a guy called darrien hunt got killed by a cop while he was cosplaying.....like THE F**K?!

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another black teen shot by a cops.
families ruined by one guys hunch.
how much mourning must there be
in order for this injustice to cease.

my very body shivers at the slightest thought
someones out there about to get shot,
because a misunderstanding escalated 
and now another life is terminated. 

the victim was dressing up for f**k sake
wielding a sword that was blatantly fake
going home after a day at comicon
is that a reason to rob a man of his son?

i swear to god this needs to stop
gun slinging isn't part of the job.
quit the clint eastwood act
before a silent army begins to react. 

© 2014 nigrum homonculus


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'Before a silent army begins to react.'
I really love that line.
Because that's what might happen when you push people to the very edge.

Posted 6 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

6 Years Ago

thank you very much, man this piece is old as hell lol. forgot about it so i really do appreciate th.. read more
You would think the human race could raise itself above something like this and prevent this from happening? It is always sad whenever a life is lost for whatever the reason. Sadder still, when the reason doesn't make any real sense. It seems as if the world has tilted in a very strange, sad, scary direction with no one knowing how to put it right again.
You poem is strong, and has a strong voice that I hope, will never be silenced.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I am not fond of the Police. From one cop to the next is one thing. We have to judge people as individuals and I am aware of the important function a police force plays in a society but as an institution, I am not a fan of law enforcement. This is a good poem and it does stand on it's own. Good work my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on September 18, 2014
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Tags: death, this, world, is, doomed

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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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