understand this.

understand this.

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
"

erm....hmm....er....yeah. its a rant. nothing more. nothing less.

"
drop the cliches and insults
drop the barrage of bold words.
understand this and understand clearly
your clueless dicking around adds to my misery. 
my day sucked harder than a s****y vacuum cleaner.
i don't need your tasteless tongue wetting my ears.
i don't need your judgemental voice polluting my airspace.
i don't need your eyes pressed against my cheekbones.
so
UN-DER-STAND this.
drop the big man persona when you're a wee pee shooter.
don't come for the full course if you're a side man.
leave that b***h called attitude at home and f**k it when you get in
and....
keep your words soft and sweet,
cause I'll shove them down your little throat.

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


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now here's a bold display of both your dilligent craft ( really there are so many great lines included in this write) combined with a blantant display of some pretty contriversal rage infested ranting ( admittedly I felt a tad intimidated)
a really interesting read my friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awww. Phil. of course Annabelle will always be sweet..... or not. But I'l try, I really liked this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


"s****y vacum cleaner " I want one of those.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love a good rant.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Look, if you have something to say to me, say it to my face, d****t. ;p Kidding. You show 'em! Bitchass.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

11 Years Ago

dude, i'll go blackie chan on your guido a*s. haha thanks man.
That_Girl

11 Years Ago

B***h please.... as if I'M a guido. And it'd be a guidette, dumbass. Get your s**t straight before e.. read more
Hot damn, Phil. *high-five* I agree with every word of this, haha.

Posted 11 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

11 Years Ago

haha thanks for reading maddie

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Added on December 30, 2012
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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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