still alive and kicking

first ex. ameena. she did a lot of bad things to me...also my first love.

Your cries for help still haunt me

Waking me up as I sleep.

In the dead of night our memories

Creep its way into my dreams.

This heart is still in stitches

And still it leaks blood

All over my white bed sheets

All over my white floor.

But as my life drains away

Everything will still matter

I’m still alive and kicking

Not dead so therefore stronger.

I thank you for your abuse

An applaud you for your torment

If you never were so despicable

I would never be who I am today.

Phillip yorke, Datvirgo

A brother to many

An uncle to 1.

A son to two

But….

A big loss for you. 

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Bravo, Phil/DatVIrgo

That was literally mind blowing. Seriously, you were amazing!

And it's her loss

[nigrum homonculus]

that meant a lot steven man. an damn right it was her loss. thanks for the awesome review bro

[Steven Cash]

no prob no prob

[Steven Cash]

btw I looked at The Rake

it was ok.

[That_Girl]

Oh my God that ending is gold. White sheets... a metaphor (vaguely) for purity? No? lol anyways, I loved it. Sounds like she didn't deserve you at all. :)

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! and oooooh someones on the ball. yeah it was a metaphor for that as she was my first love. haha thanks!

[That_Girl]

Ha! That's great. :) Well done!

[Tabitha t]

The ending was great and very powerful.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks tabitha. glad you liked it!

[That_Guy]

I like this, aside from my sheets being black and red it's like you were talking about me heh. I love the ending, from one brother, uncle, and son to another thanks Mate

[nigrum homonculus]

haha my bed sheets aren't really white. no way. i ain't about that life. thanks man i'm glad you could relate man. thanks for the review!

[That_Guy]

what life?

[nigrum homonculus]

lol its just a lil thing i say. doesn't mean life in general.

[That_Guy]

gotcha, well nice write, cheers

[Allycat]

Extraordinary piece :D
"I'm still alive and kicking
Not dead so therefore stronger.
I thank you for your abuse
And applaud you for your torment
If you never were so despicable
I would never be who I am today."
what a positive way to look at the situation! Most people would let this experience make them weaker, but it has made you stronger..and I applaud you for that
I really love the ending as well :D

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks ally! yeah man no dog pisses on a moving car so you gotta keep moving! (crap saying i know) thanks for the awesome review

[Allycat]

haha I haven't heard that one before! and no problem :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice man! Especially the ending. Great job

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks man! i appreciate that!