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A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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...not much to say here other than...this unserious s**t has to stop

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In one day

Out the other

That is the life

Of a facebook lover

Marital status single

Next second they’re taken.

Now its complicated

Oooh foundations are shaken.

Really bro? really?

Don’t say your love is stronger

I got milk in the fridge

That has lasted longer.

If you really found someone

Then I’m happy for you son.

But if its “love at first sight”

Don’t expect to have fun….

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


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Hahaha this is great! So true! People need to just keep their relationships off of Facebook. :p Awesome job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

haha yeah! then complain that everyone knows about what they're doing ¬_¬. thanks for the review!
Can't do facebook man. I'm not putting my likeness and private info on line for nothing. Can't online date either for same reason and I want my hands mouth and tongue on the girl ASAP. Good poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

ah i only use fb to connect with friends. nothing more. everything else is private and online dating.. read more
Very entertaining! I had a good laugh with this one =)
Keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

ah thanks man. i appreciate that review
I love your rants~

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

thanks! glad you do! plenty more where that came from
haha this poem is actually pretty refreshing. I love the conversational tone of it. Thanks for making me smile!

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

haha thank you! glad you liked it!
Amen! That's what I can say about this. Dang it was good

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

thanks bro!

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Added on August 15, 2012
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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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