flippin rich kids....

this is not how i feel about rich kids at all. but i thought that if someone from my endz was to talk to 1 of them this is what would be said. btw alot of the words are english slang.

Sawn off shotgun, that’s a local shooting

On my street, some young gun was bleeding

Never on the news that youths friends never knew

Remaining nameless while the hitman shameless.

 

What?

You’re sayin that I’m faking?

He was runnin up in yard like he was gatlin.

Pin point accuracy like sahin

So why you claiming all around you is failing?

 

Oi, you thinkin you’re worth suttin?

Flippin rich kids you don’t know nuttin.

Go and chat s**t looking like you’re brad pit

Live in mitcham, you’ll then know suffering.

 

Scuse my temper, my flare and lairy banter.

Its not my nature, I’m really not a hater.

But stuck up children thinking that they’ve got it bad

Has pushed me to the limit, enough is what I’ve had. 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

OI is hey I think. Something to do with skinheads. Great poem man. I love poetry with lots of slang and swearing. It's real baby! Yeah man. "He was runnin up in the yard like he was gatlin pin point accutacy like sahin." Is that an actual reference to a person cuz that's a Hajji name man.

[nigrum homonculus]

it can be. yeah justin gatlin is one of the fastest men in the world and nuri sahin is a football player. he can pass the ball anywhere. so that's why i used them. thanks for the feedback man. much appreciate it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

enough is enough........emotions penned well

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ok awesome! Had to think about the slang for a moment but awesome nontheless. Rich kids tick me off. Thinking they're better and crud. Not all do of course but most are snotty. Great poem bro