words to an ex

erm...ya these weren't the exact words i said to her but along the lines. probably the last in the line of angry poems i have been making lately

Your salty tears are overrated

Crying me an ocean

B***h you made your bed

Now you have to lie in it.

 

You wished that I was dead

 

I tried to be a nun

Tried to block you, forget you.

Now I’m leaving you

no lie

Your sweaty s****y antics is a genesis to your demise

A relationship?

More like relationshit!

So get off the floor and stop throwing a fit. 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Good break up from a psycho b***h poem. I had a couple of those. I like the words "Sweaty S****y." She sounds like fun

[nigrum homonculus]

ah she wasn't psycho.....ok she cried over me getting call of duty black ops but that's more clingy. LOL trust me...that fun was short lived.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hey I think you told me about her. Never try and take a mans games or sports away. Its a no no no matter how fun you are lol

[nigrum homonculus]

haha yeah i did. see i don't think she'll ever learn that as everything has to be about her lol.

[Tai Ryens]

Quite a cruel way to treat a past lover, hehe . . . If I were to read only the first stanza (which I have reread at least thrice), it would almost be as if you were death and you were coming to claim the soul of a person who attempted suicide, but thought differently after they hung from the noose or overdosed on pills or perhaps slit their wrists.

[nigrum homonculus]

DAAAAMN! you're imagination is something tai! i'm actually honoured you added this to your favourites so thank for that and thank you for the amazing review.

[Tai Ryens]

I have been told, hehe. It isnt you who should be honored, but rather I for having the ability to read your works.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Hahahha ah amen! Good job. Some gals are just like that (no offense ladies, I said some not all) and I bet I would be funny if you actually did

[nigrum homonculus]

haha yeah man. if i did what? an you still up for that halo thing?

[Harley (arbiter)]

If you said that to her, and yeah I'm waiting to see if you have any thoughts on it

[nigrum homonculus]

i said the relationship relationshit line and you made your bed blah blah blah. ah oki i'll pm you

[That_Girl]

Relationshit! Love it!! She sounds like dead weight.. Good to cut her loose. :) nice!!

[nigrum homonculus]

haha she really was. thanks for reading!