a message to a liar

...some people make me sick. seriously.

I don’t know you very well

And to be honest I don’t want to

The things that I’ve heard….

I pray they ain’t true.

 

My English may be bad

But this is a f*****g rant.

You brang my friend down

Because you felt like an ant?

 

For that I’ll despise you

And hope to god I find you.

You have no f*****g clue

About the pain you put him through.

 

I find it hard to believe

How a human will lie and pounce

I don’t know what your problem is

But I bet it is hard to pronounce.

 

B***h….

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Great rant!

"I don’t know what your problem is
But I bet it is hard to pronounce." This is fantastic!

[nigrum homonculus]

thank you for reading! much appreciate it

[darkness*star1985]

Damn you let her have it. Good for you, it is nice to see this kind of work. What needs to be said. so fanatic work.

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thank you for that! glad you enjoyed it

[afra]

wow this was amazing .....i loved it ....well done

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks afra!

[afra]

any time ..=)

[A. V. Madison]

I know who this is about, since I was the one who was the bearer of bad news. You ssid what needed to be said. Rating 100/100.

[nigrum homonculus]

oh damn for real? thank you for that. glad you agree with me on this :)

[A. V. Madison]

Yeah. My now ex-best friend knew it all along. I felt that Harley needed to know so I told him. The only thing I want to say to her is that karma's a b***h.

[nigrum homonculus]

ah i see...sad thing is she'll probably never read this. amen! never throw stones if you live in a glass house.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Amen. That's the stuff. Friggin awesome man. Thank you for writing this. I don't give 100's anymore because perfection is a lie but I think this deserves it. 100/100

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks. ah dw man i always got your back. haha! thank you harley

[Harley (arbiter)]

Your very welcome bro

[That_Girl]

Nice! It's good to rant... seems like she deserved it. Well done!

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! sad thing is she probably will never read this

[That_Girl]

Hmmm.... maybe it should accidentally, ANONYMOUSLY get slipped into her mailbox. :) Just a thought.

[nigrum homonculus]

LOL maybe maybe. gotta ask some questions to some people before that happens. don't want to bring war on their doorstep

[That_Girl]

lol alright alright. :) This the friend we were talking about earlier?

[nigrum homonculus]

huh? pm me the persons name i can't remember

[That_Girl]

You sent me a picture and asked my opinion...

[nigrum homonculus]

oh no no no no...its someone else.

[That_Girl]

Ohhh okay. :) jc

[Persephone]

Killer line at the end! Get her! hehe Enjoyed this a lot!

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks! i will one day