ambition of hatred.

this isn't entirely true. i will write one based on actual events.

I’m 5 ft 2 now. 4’8 at 16.

The last year of school was the first year of strength.

The boys towered above me

Dwarfed me, mocked me.

Put me in dustbins. Stole my lunch money

But that year was different. I grew tired of it

And one day I shouted “I’ve had enough of this s**t!”

The vultures, they heard. Swooped down at speed.

Observing my anger, Laughing at the scene.

They thought I was easy, The same boy from day

How wrong they were. They were indeed my prey.

I hunted them down, just like they hunted me.

Taking down the big guns. Showing no mercy.

But at this point I realised…and I knew it was too late

The big boys were now me and I became the thing I hate.

Reviews

[Kelsey]

This poem is so meaningful. It has a great flow and it's something people could really learn from. Wonderful job.

[nigrum homonculus]

thank you for reading kelsey! i really do appreciate the kind review

[That_Girl]

So many people go through this... very well written. Bravo!

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks for reading! glad you liked it!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Amazing. I loved it all. Great job. Simple as that I loved it

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks bro. glad you loved it lol

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Are you really 5 ft. 2? :3
I think everyone should read this poem. They might learn something :D

[nigrum homonculus]

yep almost 20 and the height of a 14 yr old GO ME! thanks!

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Lol, not a 14 year old... But that's cool to me XD I guess I'm just weird lol

[nigrum homonculus]

its true! some guys i know who are 15 are taller than me! i don't get taken seriously for it haha

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Lolol I'm sorry XD I'm taller than you. Only by a wittleee. :D

[nigrum homonculus]

O.O don't throw me in a dustbin...

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

I'd never! XD I'm more of the hug-you-until-you-die kinda person. :3

[Baby Ricochet]

I love this one.It's got grat rhymes. It kinda sucks when you realize you're every bit as brutal as the bad guys. I think that's why super heros bug the crap out of me. Who are they kidding with that white knight s**t. You play with filth you get dirty.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks man! very true words there! batman is guilty of exactly that!