Excisions....

sorry for the use of repetition of dumb words

I cut away my failed past

I Cut you away from yourself

I cut away these recurring nightmares

I cut away your recurring dreams.

I cut away my meaningless qualifications

I excise you from your meaningless limbs

I cut away my life long work.

I cut away your physical achievements

I cut away every single thing about me.

I cut away every single thing you love.

I cut away every single thing about me…

I’m just like you….a victim to insanity. 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

I like repetition

[nigrum homonculus]

ah you pull it off better than i do though

[That_Girl]

Really interesting... the repetition isn't annoying at all. It works and flows pretty nicely. I like! :)

[nigrum homonculus]

thank you. i'm not a fan of repetition thats all