that good looking friend.

that good looking friend.

A Poem by nigrum homonculus
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some past experiences worming its way into this one. not a rant though so don't mistaken it for one

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Whenever we are out

You always get the attention.

I always feel left out

I’m always never mentioned.

Its not your fault…really

God made you beautiful

But damn, you over shadow me

Making social events woeful.

I don’t crave the attention

I’m okay at that end

BUT I want some recognition.

I have a name, its not “that friend”

i could add more

but that would feel cynical

you are my buddy

and in this world, that's critical. 

© 2012 nigrum homonculus


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Well written! Unfortunate situation though. :/

Posted 12 Years Ago


There are some who are very charismatic. Everyone seems to gravitate toward them.
Good Write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem man. I had a buddy sort of like that. He wasn't handsome so much as charasmatic & he knew like a gazzion people & sometimes it was hard being in his shadow..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome man! Can't say I can relate but I can get where your coming from and that does kinda sound like it would suck but anyway this was great!

Posted 12 Years Ago


nigrum homonculus

12 Years Ago

thanks for understanding man. glad you enjoyed it

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nigrum homonculus
nigrum homonculus

london, surrey, United Kingdom



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i have been away from this place for.....lord knows, something like 3-4 years? so i guess all the things i have experienced in that time have to come out somehow you know? so here we are. you're readi.. more..

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