Sucky day

eh, just how i'm feeling right now. not much here

I don’t wish to be in company

please remove yourself from me.

 

I don’t despise or dislike you

You just don’t know what I’m going through

 

Don’t ask any questions. I’ll snap even faster.

My patience is thin, my body languages the answer

 

I’m not sulking or moaning I just want alone time

A problem shared is a problem halved

But no one wants this problem of mine.

 

Don’t take it the wrong way. The day has got me beaten.

Please forgive my attitude. You don’t deserve this treatment. 

Reviews

[That_Girl]

"Don’t ask any questions. I’ll snap even faster.

My patience is thin, my body languages the answer"

LOVE these two lines. The whole thing was really good though! :) Nicely done.

[Michael G.]

Yeah, we all get em. It's how we deal with them. Sometimes it's wise to go ahead and pull the covers over you early and call it the day. Still, you never know what lies around the corner. It may just be a game changer. Good write.

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

"A problem shared is a problem halved"
you have an interesting use of language you mix with your prose
keep cultivating it
never stop pushing yourself and realizing your suffering
is half of progress
and you have every right to solitude when it's needed
and to be respectful in the face of anger
is to be commended and honorable

[Baby Ricochet]

great poem. loved it

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks again man. liking the new name aswell!

[afra]

i feel the same way some times ......anyway ..good job

[nigrum homonculus]

yeah kinda sucks. thanks for reading afra!

[afra]

welcome