New Religion (the rorscach test)

a collab done with a talented friend of mine, Cole skies.

New RELIGION (the rorschach test) 

            

my body will fail internally                            my soul will forever live                                                                                                                          wandering...wandeing..                                                                                      but will it embrace eternity?

Plastic hooks keep my flesh from falling apart                                                                      As the vultures usher in a broken premise.  (I've been bleeding out patterns for days But still my body keeps me wandering away..)

not giving me the comfort of a swift silent exit left in a light of omniscience, faceless with its gaze onlooking the degradation, immaculate in its understanding 10 commandments tower above me... foreboding...eclipsing.

Barricaded inside of my faint inarticulate castle  I've been stripped to nothing besides the essence of a laconic tangibility  One that gives myself to the hissing gutural perception of a new religion  And one that gives a manifestation of a protoplasm lobotomy

the vulnerable ethereal state of mind emerges. the fear of understanding overshadowing concise thought. floating inches from the burning ground, so far from the white clouds. the lesser known dimensions of a crumbling cynical reality.

                Tonight I learned how angels breach their contracts

                           

                   This disjunction of my ambient personalities will send myself through the fissure

 

      

                            And everything will be so funny and beautiful on the way down

                         

                                                                  Everything will finally be perfect...

                                                                                            

                                                               Kept wandering... wandering... 

Author's Note

a collab done with me and cole skies. a brilliant poet and an even better poet to work with. the poem is about the downfall of someone going through depression. we hope you enjoy this as much as we did creating it :)

Reviews

[Wild Willow Blue]

I love the language of this. Very well done, both of you. I really did enjoy this. Just the right amount of darkness and pain, coupled with a sense of impossible hope for change. Great piece!

[Baby Ricochet]

Hissing guteral perception of a new religion. That's great. Well done!

[That_Girl]

This is incredible... well done! :)

[afra]

wow ...amazing ...good job