the Addicts prayer

a very very quick 1.

                             

Our dealer, who’s not in prison

I do not know his name

My poison come, It will be done,

On this day as it is any other.

Give me this day without withdrawal,

And forgive me of my neglection

As I forget those who neglect me.

Lead me not into rehab,

Deliver me from that evil,

For I’m lost in a kingdom,

Of bliss and agony.

Forever and ever

Misled. 

Reviews

[Fréyjä Helv..]

A prayer of one who has gone astray... Sincere and true... :)

[Michael G.]

Seriously good.
And a strong play off the Lord's prayer.
Well done.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks michael! glad you enjoyed it!

[Dez H.]

Man your words are like gold pimpin. Do you go to open mics? If not you should i do and i swear every time i read your works its like i should hear you on stage spittin out hot fire. I can tell by the things you write that you are one smart MF. Keep that s**t up man and i'll always be a fan pimpin.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks bro! na we don't have open mics here in england, if we do there are few an far between them. thanks! i try to keep my stuff in a spoken word format so that actually meant a lot. i will man thanks for reading and i really do appreciate it.

[Dez H.]

nah man thanks for gracing this cafe with your works and words of wisdom. Come to the US and i promise you would be a hit. I'd like to see yo s**t spoken live i know it would rule the floor. Keep that s**t up

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks man. i feel honoured by your words. ah one day man. i was thinking of going this year but money is a b***h right now. when i do go there i will deffo let you know. i gotta here your stuff too.

[Dez H.]

yeah i feel you on the money tip. I would love to visit England me and my wife talked about it but yeah so much s**t taking cash away that it is only a pipe dream until a coin drops from the sky and lands in my hand. It'll happen one day. But in the mean time keep that good good flowing and i'll do the same thing.

[Cole Hayley]

A very emotionl piece, amazing, as always. you always take hard subject matter and make it into something like this, incredible.,

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks Cole. glad you liked it.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

The A-Team.:D
Very powerful and sad.
Drugs is the single lethal thing in this world after weapons.
well done.

[nigrum homonculus]

that and ignorance are. thanks for reading bro.

[Fabio_Cassilias]

your welcome mate

[kayla]

this is amazing! It's raw and amazingly true. I enjoyed reading it(:

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! glad you liked it!

[That_Girl]

Love!