My first love.

more of thoughts on paper than a poem. wasn't meant to rhyme because it was a rant. the ending however is my attempt to rectify this...horribly.

You know what’s really funny?

When a promise is made

BUT

The person who made it fully knows they can’t fulfil it.

 

You know what else is funny?

When innocence is a victim to deception.

Turns it into a b***h, a b*****d

whatever you may call it.

Simply unpleasant.

 

What I can’t get my head around is….

Why was I the victim?

I have never done love wrong

or Slapped it senseless like a wife beater.

So why am I on the receiving end of the kick in the teeth?

 

To worry for something with a mind of its own,

Is like injecting octopus blood in your eye.

Painful and pointless.

A level passed without its tutorial.

 

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

WOW. Exactly. This was Awesome dude.

[nigrum homonculus]

haha thanks bro. glad you could relate

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah man

[That_Girl]

Not pathetic at all. You needed to rant so you did. Now I'm curious to see what the private rant you are sending me is about.. O.o

Good job. :)

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks! and its along the lines with this and some other stuff

[That_Girl]

Mmmkay. :) You have me for about 8 minutes! :)