another day on the job?

i have never seen anyone focus on the mindset of an assassin who is a loving father. so i put myself in his shoes.

The beer, light and fluffy.

The sun, blazing down upon me.

This sandy beach with its oven cooked floor.

The steel in my pocket, projectiles galore.

Sunbathing and waiting. My mark is approaching.

Looks like a mix between Mario and van helsing.

An Odd combo, an even worse appearance.

His moobs are hairy, his speedos ain’t manly.

Who am I to judge, I’m wearing sandals with socks.

Should of prepared my outfit instead of downing shots.

 

Wait what? 

He has a little girl…..

No older than 5…just like mine at home.

She doesn’t know what I do

She wouldn’t be proud if she did.

Her dad, a homewrecker.

Sending another dad to meet his maker.

I don’t know the guy, all I know is a contract.

His name, his age and all his contacts.

Other than that, zero, zilch, ditto.

His wife don’t deserve to be a widow.

I better get out of here.

This mission’s aborted.

i need to look at myself

and get my head sorted. 

Reviews

[Harley (arbiter)]

Reminds me of how I put myself in deaths shoes for "grim reapers feelings" this aws Great. Only prob I have is that van helsing is a band not one guy. other than that Awesome and I see how you put it there to rhyme so I guess it's OK. Great write man

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks for that! dude i was basing the van helsing thing off the film that hugh jackman starred in. but again thank you for reading.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Oh never heard of the film. Whoops

[nigrum homonculus]

now that explains a lot.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah I live under a rock.

[nigrum homonculus]

hahaha! i wouldn't say that

[Harley (arbiter)]

Maybe

[Cole Hayley]

Crazy piece of work my friend, I love the format as well. Its a diffrent style then everybody else, and thats your style, I love that style.

[nigrum homonculus]

thanks bro. i thought i write pretty much the same as other poets lol so this does mean a lot.

[Pritesh]

I've never seen such instance of poetic contrast.You nicely distinguished the dual character of an assasin.I like the middle line 'to send another dad to its maker'.Your conceptulization of emotional aspect did work firmly.keep writing.;-)

[nigrum homonculus]

thank you. i really do appreciate that.

[That_Girl]

But the guy still gets killed!! lol nice. I enjoyed this quite a bit. Something off the beaten path. :)

[nigrum homonculus]

yeah he's abit of a dick like that. thank you!

[That_Girl]

Putting yourself in the mindset of a dick... hmmmm.... ;) No problem!

[nigrum homonculus]

ok ok i walked into that one. well done well done.

[That_Girl]

lol dummy. :) Thank you thank you *bows*