Stay...

Stay...

A Poem by Phillips
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totally true. music can tear you apart, but without it, we would be nothing

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There comes a time in life,
  when one must find their place in this world.

And have a reason to stay.

I have yet to find my place,
  but have found why i still walk this earth:

Music

© 2010 Phillips


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I can relate to you on this one.
I often wonder aimlessly trying to figure out my place in the world. the world so confusing it's often not clear.
but whenever i'm listening to music i know right off. im here for music---- i always feel so relaxed and ready to face the world!
i have an idea for fixing up one of the lines..... Just makes it flow a bit better.
And have a reason to stay---- A reason to stay.
nice write :) keep it up.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah, music. Such an amazing thing. What it does to twist our emotions, and bring memories. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Everyone has something that they treasure in Life...something to keep them going when all seems to fail around them....and the best feeling is finding your own.. I like this

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice one ! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2010
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