Red balloon
A Poem by
phil
A sad tale of a child loosing her balloon
Once upon an early moon Along flew a red balloon Lost by a crying child Chased by a Dad looking wild
Popped by a Ravens Claw
Now on the dirty floor Rests the deflated red balloon In the shadow of the moon.
© 2015 phil
Reviews
I some how feel sad, nice effect in wording.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you, I feel if a poem evokes any emotion it is a success.
Thank you for the fee.. read more Thank you, I feel if a poem evokes any emotion it is a success.
Thank you for the feed back.
Bleak and fantastic, well done, great read.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Bleak and fantastic, well done, great read.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks. Really appreciate the feedback.
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Added on January 6, 2015
Last Updated on February 3, 2015
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