Red balloon

Red balloon

A Poem by phil
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A sad tale of a child loosing her balloon

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Once upon an early moon
Along flew a red balloon
Lost by a crying child
Chased by a Dad looking wild
Popped by a Ravens Claw
Now on the dirty floor
Rests the deflated red balloon
In the shadow of the moon.

© 2015 phil


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I some how feel sad, nice effect in wording.

Posted 9 Years Ago


phil

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I feel if a poem evokes any emotion it is a success.

Thank you for the fee.. read more
Bleak and fantastic, well done, great read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

phil

9 Years Ago

Thanks. Really appreciate the feedback.

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Added on January 6, 2015
Last Updated on February 3, 2015
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