Write me (Naturally)

Last poem in the "rambling" series

Sometime I wonder

At some point in the future

Would you be thinking back to that day

That very random day of nothingness ?

It was almost summer,

The boring professor went on and on

So we didn’t bother to pay him any attention

I wrote plot for my coming stories

From somewhere, I could feel

Your scent was mixed with the smell of heat

You looked up dictionary to write a song

Wasn’t it the most natural thing to do ?

Not knowing a word, you asked me

You were busy composing

Your nose almost touched the paper

And I felt warm and blissful inside

Everything was so quiet

Only two of us in my world

Knees touching together under the table

Wasn’t it the most natural thing to do ?

Wasn’t it also the craziest thing I felt ?

 

I wondered if you ever remembered your promise

That you would write me a song once we became close

I waited and waited

Only to knew your muse was mostly her.

Did you remember your promise ?

Still, I’ve been hanging on

Longing for the yet-to-come birthday song

The song of my own

 

This almost summer day,

My patience was challenged again

People sing “If a song could get me you”

And I wondered was it what you wanted to do to her ?

Would you write me a song ?

Or you already forgot ?

Wasn’t it the most natural thing to do ?

One promises, one waits

So weird that summer day.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem for someone I had lots of feelings for last year. It belongs to a series I name "rambling" including 4 poems. English isn't my native language, and although I've learned it for 7 years, I've just tried writing poem recently, so constructive comments are very much welcome.

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

great write. maybe one day you will hear your song.Your english is good, but the start may sound more natural like this...


Sometime I wonder

At some point in the future

Would you be thinking back to that day

...Its just one word of a difference, but it helps the flow

[Lorna]

It's really great, and the poem creates really good visual in the readers mind, :)