Holy Grounds

As the day is winding down
Nestling near this old home town
A fasting figure quickens hopes
From deep inside our tele-scopes

People ponder asking why
Reaching out, reclaiming sky
As clueless cattle eat up pain
Losing love they stood to gain

So as the truth is being shown
Of dug up dirt and lofty zones
Be not fooled by sappy sounds
While raising up these holy grounds

Reviews

[Rohan Tandon]

It was truly music.... the rhythm was gr8 as always.... nd also, the message was loud nd clear. Thanks 4 sharing.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wonderful writing and poetry , pheasant. Good flow-
Also as with most every poem i have read of yours, wisdom within the lines.

Chloe

[Tommy]

Flawless rhyme and rhythm; I love the feel you express with this. They tell us to rise above, and stay grounded too…

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

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your rhyme and meter is a delight to read..makes it all the better to read you :)

[Shiningwolf]

Beautiful poem and the flow was perfectly smooth, defently a pleasure to read.

[Emily B]

lovely

[Ladysue]

this flowed so smoothly, so beautifully expressed...a pleasure to read...

[Crayon]

Very beautiful and descriptive. It's really well done. Great job!

[Fabric Pulse]

At first to me the picture didn't fit, but now I see it's just right, no other image could be played nicer with your words.

[Tate Morgan]

I love it I like rhyme as you know and especially good ones