Telling Ourselves

Telling Ourselves

A Poem by pheasant

we sit in waiting
telling ourselves we'll be there
while moving we're not

© 2011 pheasant


Author's Note

pheasant
senryu 5-7-5 ...human nature. This is the lower side aspect of sitting and waiting... when there is also a higher side to doing the same thing.

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Lovely! This sums up pretty much what I've been thinking about today. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, this one is so true of so many..
Putting things off ..
last line says it all .. 'while moving we're not'
Very nice Senyru.

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2011
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pheasant

Santa Rosa, CA



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