These Dreams

Then and now
We lift our brow
When touching trickling bursts

As poetic lines one thirsts

Come to bring on firsts

Sculpted and resulted
Open and outspoken

No jokin'... these tokens
Beat rhythms of the heart

...These dreams do spark the art...

Author's Note

Written after touching a poem here by Rory CJ Frankson

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

Hmm... you sure that Rory guy can write?

Thanks Pheasant and if anyone is interested these verses are on my poem...
"Tomorrows sorrows Today" in review... and, may shortly be posted in a collab, so stay tuned. Ha ha ha, and I came to read this and use it as a bounce? To find I had read this about an hour ago on my page and a message between... friends. Too cool!

[Rossen]

So well put, solid work here!

[Crayon]

Lovely. Amazingly calming and soothing. It's not boring, which I find happens alot when writers go for this kind of mood. I like it alot. Nicely done!

[Shiningwolf]

This was very calming, like a peace of mind. :)

[howlfjdks]

This is like a drop of water in a calm lake. A gentle ripple in my mind.

[Ladysue]

This was a lovely write and a beautiful picture. I love that last line....

Beat rhythms of the heart
...These dreams do spark the art...

A pleasure to read...

[OT]

that rory guy can definitely write!! haha as can you! I agree with Chloe! a wonderful little snapshot almost! nice!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ro is a wonderful person and writer. As are you..
What a gorgeous photograph for the poem .. beautiful shade of blue.
My poetic thirst is quenched for now I have no words.. your's are drinking it in .. Seems so many poems you read inspire you. Wonderful that other's words can do this for you and others. Two beautiful verses.. Yes, dreams do spark the art..

Chloe

[Tommy]

Well, I am pretty sure that Rory guy can write :) And from the likes of this so can you!

Nice Write!
RLG,
Tommy