Zones of Intent

Zones of Intent

A Poem by pheasant

We are what we think
Or we think what we are
We know how to blink
But don't need to try hard

Our breath is so natural
It moves on it's own
And with focused intent
This tool can be grown

And so it can be
With the thoughts we think
When using this tool
We come to the brink

The brink of the known
These seeds we have sewn...
But with seeds planted now
We give life a zone

A zone to the possible
As yet to be shown
Where the old impossible
Becomes overblown

Overblown by the pattern
The frequency... tone
Which arranges the subtle
Ether, mass... and clones

Clones our intents...
Our mind's eye's scope
And begins to shape futures...
Are yours fueling hope?

© 2011 pheasant


Author's Note

pheasant
Do we really know what may be possible?

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Your poem flows so well. Your beginning verse brings the reader in ..
I once thought we knew but now , I don't think we really know what may be possible ... or what possibilities may have already been made possible, kept from us.
You make me think here .. wonderful poem to make a body ponder.
I really like this verse:

"We are what we think
Or we think what we are
We know how to blink
But don't need to try hard"

""We are what we think or we think what we are"... very true..
Using clones in the two different contexts adds much .

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A great rhythm to this piece. this is very thought provoking. Right from the first two lines I knew this was going to be good. Great progression leading brilliant ending...This was cleverly done...I much enjoyed it...




Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We were given the gift of free will and a mind to use that gift but too many people allow the mass media to make their decisions. A witty and smooth flowing poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem flows so well. Your beginning verse brings the reader in ..
I once thought we knew but now , I don't think we really know what may be possible ... or what possibilities may have already been made possible, kept from us.
You make me think here .. wonderful poem to make a body ponder.
I really like this verse:

"We are what we think
Or we think what we are
We know how to blink
But don't need to try hard"

""We are what we think or we think what we are"... very true..
Using clones in the two different contexts adds much .

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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pheasant

Santa Rosa, CA



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