Cool, Clear Night

my first poem

I stand here thinking on a cool, clear night
Admiring the stars with a thing called sight
I stand among people on a planet called Earth
Looking out at the heavens for a new sense of worth

Author's Note

This is one of my first pieces done while contemplating the night sky several years ago... in one of the chilliest parts of the country... Minnesota.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

As I read this I was thinking how we take so many things for granted.. like sight.
The poem is short and sweet as some have said ... but the poem has a meaning and a lesson.. plus it has a cool clear night filled with stars.. stars are a little magical to me.. wishing upon a star, ect. Sounds like a beautiful place to look at stars.
We all inhabit this Earth and we should always look for a new sense of worth.

[NyanMeow]

Short, sweet, and to the point. I like it!

Now THAT is beautiful .... trust me I feel what you say , I am a sky-watcher myself .
A SUPERB WRITE.

[A. M. Hood]

The last line made this such a strong piece! it's short and concise, very easy to read and has a nice flow to it.
Such a simple thing put into simple words, but with a big meaning behind it.