Platypus

Random little thing I wrote in about five minutes.

I can put

a word over here

like "jelly" or "kangaroo,

and a sentence or two over here,

like,

"She tiptoed across the floor," or

"His eyes shone like the stars,"

You can tell me

that this is written strangely,

or that it makes no sense,

but you know what?

I won’t care.

Because

if you’re reading this,

I still have your attention.

And that’s what matters.

Reviews

[John Morris]

What on
earth

you

mental
person.

Though I did
enjoy
the
randomness
of



it

[Stephanie]

That is so cool! And very true. Weird as it may be (which it isn't) it still holds attention. Demands it actually :)

[MadasonBlue]

Ha. I love this. I think it might go in my library.
You don't really know what's going on here, until you get to the end.
And then, you're like, "Aw, dang, that's witty."
It reminds me of a song by Panic at the Disco:
"I don't care what you think as long as it's about me."

This is good. Write more.

[Vesa Lee]

Your wit makes me laugh.
I love how this clever and brilliant piece bluntly tells you how it is. *laughs*
Love it.
And after six months at the "Cafe" it will be the first piece I add to my library.

Please share move.*smile*

[Jazzy]

xD
You rock, you know that?
Frsrs.