+the little cry of the moon

singular,misterious....

 

 

LITTLE CRY FOR THE MOON.

 

 

 

One day seems like a special candle

waxing the broken stars,

the white window

and the subliminal twilight.

 

breathe,see,breathe,see...

and wait..

waiting the impossible second,

the beautiful and only second

the second when you breath the leaves

when you know what is darkness

when you close empty eyes

silently

silently

silently

and i return to my word.

to the forgotten book,

the anxious tear

return to my ear.

shooting my lips.

 

 

+Phantom Poet+

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Really lovely style- I think you swept the meaning into desirous intention
which inturn reflects the course of passion
I really enjoyed the metaphorical aspect, the title is classic,
your sytle reminds me of the poets of classic time, this writing can be read
over and over for your words hold soul value,
and is open to specific interpretation
This is a brilliant work of contemplation
justifies the heart, Beautiful

waiting the impossible second,
the beautiful and only second
the second when you breath the leaves
when you know what is darkness
when you close empty eyes
silently
silently
silently

[Laura E. Aranda]

This was very unique. The font added character to it. The title was what drew me in....Cheers, lea

[Veralily]

I love how abstract your writing is. It was beautiful. The repetitions and the rhythms of the words. Fabulous.

[Wyatt McIntyre]

Wonderful poem, terrifically done. A beautiful use of imagery and words to create the right effect, building a deeper sense of what the poet means and the poet intends. I love these lines: "the second when you breath the leaves/when you know what is darkness/when you close empty eyes", it captures something real, something special, something that just can't be ignored and you find that you just can't help but close your eyes and slowly say the words, feeling it tug at your spirit. Really and truly an excellent job. I enjoyed it immensely and you have a great gift. Thank you for sharing it with all of use here.

[Thomas James Martin]

Very beautiful. I love the lines: waiting the impossible second,
the beautiful and only second
the second when you breath the leaves
when you know what is darkness
when you close empty eyes

You may have the real god-given gift of thinking poetically to touch our hearts and souls.

A pleasure to read this. You make me want to brush up on my Spanish.

Tom

[vanishing]

Really nice work-makes the reader feel
as if looking into space-particularly seeing
starlight flicker..
The wording flows with abstract passion
The entire writing has a motion of rhythm
in punctuating, detailing form
Beautiful