unnormal scene.+

unnormal scene.+

A Stage Play by poetemaudite+

Gloomy scene

furious scream, what did it said first?

the only broken bones with mercury

anxious, anxious

without breathing

i want to breath, breath

see, and see ,please see me

when i was with the little snake of this sadness

i want to listen my nocturne Op 37

 

its indescriptible sound.....

+ and i search bloody threes

reeserching.....

screaming.

 

End of the empy lights.

 

© 2008 poetemaudite+


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Interesting versus of thoughts on sadness... It leaves alot of room readers to assume or interject their own oppinions or thoughts in interpreting your writing. To me I felt like I was being born, then I felt like I was being ignored and finally I felt like I was searching for a higher power but many obsticles prevented me from seeing them. ala the tress.. Enjoyed this write~

Posted 16 Years Ago



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poetemaudite+
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Bogotà, Colombia



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�Poete Maudite�.. how can i say ? a little anxious, a little paranoid but is only for the bad times , terrible fear.. but i know something important: i know how is a dream and.. more..

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