the tide

The tide rises the tide falls

as no one walks those hallowed

halls or views those unbreakable

walls. The tide rises the tide falls

with none to view the undead

king whose wrath is like a

thousand storms whose death

will bring about the destruction

of the world as the tide rises

the tide falls. He must never

awake from his eturnal slumber

for if that happens only one can stop

him. He who is half a prince who

was raised by the sea will bring

the undead king to his knees.

As the tide rises the tide falls

Author's Note

ingnore the spelling mistakes please

Reviews

[Rhine Wolf]

Well i like the story line, very imaginative, just one point, the line "

"The tide rises the tide falls
with none to view the undead
king whose wrath is like a
thousand storms whose death
will bring about the destruction
of the world as the tide rises
the tide falls."

you have me a bit confused here. why would his death bring destruction would not him wakening bring about this destruction?

other wise a good story line!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[A]

I really like this poem! I love the line that you used repeatedly, "As the tide rises the tide falls." Great poem! :)